No new FR strip for now, but something a little bit different.
For a year and a half from now I had an idea about Comic with a capital C, a big, serious project. I sat down many times writing general rules, plot, world, characters, etc., etc., I've done some scripts, stickman sketches to decide on the layout of the pages and such. And right now I can say I fleshed it out to the point where I can start making it come true, but... I'm not sure if my drawing skills cope well with my ambitions.
Anyway, see the sketch of the first page(which I've done suprisingly fast for my standards
)for yourself and disregard any bad english, because the script I've done is in polish :
The plot, all I can say for now, would be in a dark, pessimistic tone, despite of the whole page feeling. The whole story would be a paranormal detective thing, with some drama, etc. And, if I'd sit down to it seriously, would probably be a neverending story. Which fits the scenario, because each chapter would be a one case to solve.
This page is a first one of 4 page introduction, a prologue of sorts. As for now I can say that I made it my goal to at least finish prologue and ask around for opinions - both from my friends, maybe family and through the net - including this place.
Thus, any questions, opinions, advices or critique are welcome.