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MicasR wrote:Is it just me... or is he looking apathetic a lot lately?

hmm, now that I think about it, you're right. He should lighten up.

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Make him wear a funny hat Very Happy

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MicasR wrote:Make him wear a funny hat :D

A hat? With that jacknife hair? His attempt at putting it on would be humorous all its own.

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Nikolai wrote:.... :suspect: I dont get it...

It helps if you read it out loud.

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....."Cone, Cone? ... CUT!" .... I still dont get it...

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There's a story behind this.. On another message board, a "board bro" of mine and I got into a conversation about us joining forces in signature sexiness, and I was all like "Crypto! GATTAI! So he was all "GATTAI!" and then attmpted merging our usernames to make "CryptoZeroRoxorz", which I 1-up'd with "ChrayosZiridium". Then, with that name, I instantly got inspiration and started drawing an interpretation of our name in Gurren Lagann rip-off mecha style.

So, here it is, "Chrayos Ziridium".

My first shot at mecha ever, nothin special though. I wanna do a better version.

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Now I wanna get back to work on my Clockwork Concept Art

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Bleh Bleh Bleh, rush rush rush, comics etc.

June's official birthday was on the 18th. Better late than never. No adult ever looks forward to their birthday - that is if you count her as an adult seeing as how she acts teenaged all the time >_> - so help them make the best of it!


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HAHAHAHAHAHAHA

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"hey cousin, let's go see big american titties!" XD

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Vance's reference sheet.

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Haha, I have a better mug than all of you!

.. But it HAS started to crack. >_>



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Right. You asked for it.

Your basic shapes are ok, there's a bit of oddness around the anthro faces caused by the eyes. Like they are too big or in the wrong place. The human faces are worse. You need to focus on improving your eyes and human faces. Basic anatomy is relatively good, excepting the tendency for massive tits. A minor niggle is the dog boy things lower jaw. It's far too thin to support its own weight. It needs a bit of thickness and a bit less upper head. But it could be counted as stylistic choice.

Put a bit more work into sketches, don't be afraid to create redundant lines in pencil as you can either erase or ink over them. Which leads onto my next bit. Start inking. Forget about colouring. Work with a grey palette to get your shading and highlights. You can augment that later with a colour overlay layer.

But keep practicing, as you are on the right track, read some decent comics to get a feel for pacing as your little strip up there is a bit here and there. Draw on a larger scale then reduce down as well.

But you have the basics pretty much down, though I would advise you to start deviating away from anime influences.

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Thanks much, man. Also, as far as the lower jaw tid-bit concerning the "Dog-Boy-Thing", are you referring to the Foxboy (pointy ears) or the dog in the reference sheet above?

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Dog.

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Thanks much. Helps more than you know Smile!

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Bleh Bleh Bleh, mediocrity at its finest.

Just my way of giving some of my other friends screen time :3.

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Funny, how it takes me forever to finish a strip.

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This is my birthday. This is my cake.

Happy 18th to me today Very Happy!

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Wow, nice.

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A True Vocal Virtuoso, that fox.

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LOVE the last panel

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PAIN!

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Haha, Nice.

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A request for this guy on another board I frequent.

:0 And yes, I take requests, granted I believe I can handle it, and I have time to.

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