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Cartoon "Get With The Times"

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1 Cartoon "Get With The Times" on Fri Feb 12, 2010 3:27 pm

This cartoon contains mature content.

http://jeinu.deviantart.com/art/Get-with-the-Times-153823096

We request that everyone be blunt in whatever criticisms are to be made of it: we still plan to send this out to festivals and want to get it fixed before having to pay submission fees.

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2 Re: Cartoon "Get With The Times" on Sat Feb 13, 2010 4:20 am

The voice acting is really great. Very natural sounding. The only problem with it is it seems to miss syncing up properly with the animation, while sound effects seem to manage that just fine.

But it's the best flash animation I've seen in ages. Rock on!

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3 Re: Cartoon "Get With The Times" on Sat Feb 13, 2010 5:14 am

I have mixed opinion about voices. Maybe a little mastering, add add some effects when they're in room, some reverb maybe? It's sounds dry without ambience. But the voices, although not very good, are decent and fitting to the characters. And yes, synchroniznation could be better.

Animation is also decent.

Are you leaving conclusions open to the viewers? Because I couldn't see one clear moral to the story.

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4 Re: Cartoon "Get With The Times" on Wed Feb 17, 2010 8:40 am

Thank you: I'll try to fix the sync problems Thursday. I'll see how ambient filters work.

Hell yeah, conclusions are open to viewers. Aren't you annoyed writer tells you what to think about it within the story?

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5 Re: Cartoon "Get With The Times" on Wed Feb 17, 2010 8:58 am

No, I'm not Very Happy.

Good thing is that neither the guy or the girl are likeable. Both are extermists in some way. That's a plus.

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6 Re: Cartoon "Get With The Times" on Wed Feb 17, 2010 10:41 am

I wasn't insulting you, I respected your opinion and am trying to fix the thing. I was just stating why I did the thing my way.

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